I enjoyed reading your descriptive writing that you have created.You have described Alma well. I certainly was an interesting video to watch. Maybe next time you could try and use some more descriptive language such as shiny black snow boots or even some similies. As cold as a icy snow storm. Remmeber to check your spelling before you post onto your blog and that you have capital letters at the start of a sentence.
Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home!
Hi Bailey
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I enjoyed reading your descriptive writing that you have created.You have described Alma well.
I certainly was an interesting video to watch.
Maybe next time you could try and use some more descriptive language such as shiny black snow boots or even some similies. As cold as a icy snow storm.
Remmeber to check your spelling before you post onto your blog and that you have capital letters at the start of a sentence.
Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home!
Until next time
Mrs Costello :)